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Re: The Love Note (Chapter one, edited)
Okay thanks everyone, especially the line-by-line. Avens: I just had a few comments on some of the points you made. 1. When you were commenting on the note, I couldn't ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: "shadowplay" excerpt from chapter 1
Wow. I'm extremely impressed with you right now. This is leaps and bounds better! In fact, you may have just thrown my entire lesson plan out the window. One thing ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: "shadowplay" excerpt from chapter 1
Turns out that I have internet access after all, so I've come back for a second look. Hokay. As you've indicated that you're willing to spend time on this, I'm ...
Jun 22, 2008 -
Re: "shadowplay" excerpt from chapter 1
Hokay. As you've indicated that you're willing to spend time on this, I'm going to try and break this down, so that it's not all a rush and you actually ...
Jun 22, 2008 -
Re: "shadowplay" excerpt from chapter 1
I don't have the time to go over this just yet, but I'm glad that you spent the time to work on it. I'll be out of town for the ...
Jun 21, 2008
